Feedback and video change

After showing the video for feedback and getting some suggestions I went back to fiddle with the sound in the video.

It was suggested I fade the music out in some parts to focus on the background noise instead of having plain music for the whole video. I can see what was being said here as adding the background sounds makes the video more dynamic and varying in content. IT also shows more of the scene without 'showing' it. 

I couldn't get the fade ins and outs to fit right so rather than fade the music in and out, I lowered its volume for the entire video and put the sound from the original clips back into it.

Here is the current cut: